Assignment 17 - Elevator Pitch No. 2

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Below you can find my second elevator pitch.


Reflection on the feedback from my first elevator pitch

The recommendation of including some numbers or facts in my elevator pitch was very helpful. I think that it will help the audience to understand how big the problem really is. Additionally, the listeners might take my elevator pitch more seriously because they might that I am really deep in the subject.
One classmate told me that he liked the beginning of my elevator pitch a lot. He thinks that I was really good at putting the listener into the shoes of my customer.


What I changed

Based on the feedback, I included a statistic saying that 12% of all people between 18 and 29y identify themselves as vegetarians. Furthermore, I kept the beginning of my second elevator pitch very similar to the first one. The only thing I changed at the beginning is to address my main target group, students, directly.

Comments

  1. UnknownOctober 26, 2018 at 5:06 PM

    Hello,

    I like the fact that you added the statistic into your elevator pitch and also that it looked like you researched your topic and also seem very passionate about your message. One thing I would improve with your pitch is it was kind of hard to hear you because it sounded like there was an echo in the room.

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  2. UnknownOctober 29, 2018 at 5:18 PM

    Emilia,
    just like Ivey mentioned just above, I also like the fact that you had added some statistics to your elevator speech, giving in the appearance that you had taken the time to really look into the research about vegetarians and the options they have available. I also liked the delivery of your pitch, it kept things interesting and left me wanting to hear more.

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